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Thomas was on the navigation hunt at the edge of the gorge he was expected to find the Orange onion aww man he said as found a concrete circle in the middle of a pond he couldn't  see the bottom he jumped straight Into it as he expected it was well over his head and freezing cold he keep swimmer down and down then felt the Orange onion in his fist then.swam up.He broke the surface of water gasping for air.He had done found the Orange onion he was the winner of $1000 dollars continued......